cool man
i was kinda expecting something deep and meaningful to go in the story taking in mind the titles and the prologue . but action would work well too i think . :D
i like the characters movements and the use of perspectives . and regarding the voice acting , it was pretty decent considering you didn't have anyone to help with the sounds .
i suggest you make the movements and the animation a bit smoother , i think that'd make up for no colors . but yeah , that was pretty cool . and what would i know, im no artist . :D